Feedback on my Sci-fi Desert Track

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#1

Hello! Here is a desert track I built with my friend @MediavalDeathLord. This was probably the hardest track to build since we had to delete and rebuild a whole part of it.RobloxScreenShot20191119_091718917|644x500

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I wanted it to look as if you are in the middle of nowhere, that’s why there are no buildings or details in the desert, just dunes. I love how it came out, but I would like to hear your thoughts as well :smiley:. This will be last I track show for a while since the others are in dev. Thanks for the feedback!

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#2

I have never seen a track similar to yours,very original.Yes,there are a bit of ugly angles but the rest is looking great.

Question: Are you just doing the track or it is your own game?If it is,have you tought about adding a night mode racing with Sci-Fi track lights.

I will give you 9.95/10 because those angles are a little bit ugly,if you can make them round,please do it :sweat_smile:

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#3

Thanks so much :smiley:! Yes, this is for my own game and a night race mode sounds cool. What angles? Where are they?

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#4

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The angles of the ramp before the fire circle,i know it is just a little thing,so if you don’t want or can’t,don’t fix them.

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#5

Ohh, yeah, I will fix it. Thanks.

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#6

It looks good, it reminds me of my friends building styles, yes there might be a few spots I’d change but it honestly looks nice overall.

I wouldn’t really change anything if you’re looking for more RBX, however I’d like to say, great job! :slightly_smiling_face:

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#7

The shadow in 7th image looks somewhat weird to me and that glass tunnel thing in 3rd image is weirdly shaped in my opinion. Good job with this!

#8

This looks pretty cool! Some tracks I’ve seen before did not put that much detail or extra looks to their tracks that make it unique. Good job!