Feedback on my sci-fi hallway

Hi developers, I will ask you all for some feedback on my hallway that I sort of spent like 5 hours making LOL. anyways, the screenshots below are taken at max graphics.

First Image:

Second Image:

Third Image (My favourite, as you can see all the detail of the circuit board haha):

Third Image again, just closer to the circuit board this time:

Thanks for reading and commenting. Have a great day!

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Edit: I realised the first of the third images I forgot to anchor a part. so please ignore that fact haha :smile:

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it looks really cool
and sci-fi

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This should go in #help-and-feedback:creations-feedback, but otherwise looks good :smiley:

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Looks amazing!
I think some lights like maybe point lights for the neon parts would make it look even better.

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Thank you! I really apepreciate you taking your time to comment.

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Thank you for the tip, i will edit it now haha. Thanks for the comment .

Hmm, good idea I will implement it in and possibly make an update to this post. Thanks!

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Neon is quite an overused feature in Roblox, especially in this context. I recommend somehow changing the material and adding a texture, more specifically to the circuit board itself and the wire. I’ve also noticed that the lighting doesn’t appear to be directional in all images, so I recommend adding lights instead of a SurfaceLight on the ceiling. Other than that, this seems perfect!

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One thing that can make this hallway better is using pbr materials or a material variant. The hallway models are fine the way they are built in my opinion, but they look very plain with the default roblox materials.

I also agree with the other commenter about the neon, either use a different material or make the colors less saturated so the neon isn’t as obnoxious on that circuit board panel. And if you are gonna stick with the red neon on the pillars, add a red light to them so the hallway lighting matches your build.

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