Hello. I have been working on a Sci-Fi Tycoon for awhile now and I want to know if you guys like it and how I can improve and what I should add.
My tycoon includes the following:
-Multiple bases
-research area
-Autosave
-and rebirthing
The link to my tycoon if you would like to see it for your self:
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WOW. It looks sci-fi too! Not like one of this space tycoons that claims to be sci-fi. Very cool! I like the… everything. So amazing! What do the rebirths do though? Multipliers?
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At the moment rebirths do nothing since my game is in pre-alpha but I plan on adding some droppers that require like 2 rebirths to get , some rebirth pets , and some type of rebirth weapons
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You should make the rebirth weapons and pets to buy with the currency but you unlock it one you do rebirths, you don’t get it for free after rebirths.
Edit: I’m gonna try your game out when it’s done. Could you please tell me when it’s done. Thanks!
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The building is very well done! It’s very creative and unique which brings life to the game. Although I feel there is not enough detail on the ground. There’s a lot of empty space and could use some more things. Maybe add some sort of grass or more of those trees that’s already in the game.
Example from what I mean:
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I Don’t Understand The Place In The Last Picture .d
But The Build Is So Nice!
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Great! The first thing I realized is, Avion is plane in english
In the rest, I love the construction but I think there is a lot of neon in some parts and others they lack, well I love it.
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Thank you so much bro! The place in the last photo is a futuristic Grid room
the game is called AVION not avion. Each letter stands for a different word. I have a-lot of neon since the movie Tron has it.
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okay but what does each letter mean?
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Advanced Vision In Object Navigation
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Your tycoon does a good job presenting a sci-fi feel to it. I’m glad you have a team of developers working together on this: working alone is much more difficult!
I have a couple personal suggestions about your game:
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The first few droppers to the tycoon look more like rocks layered on top of each other, and it loses the sci-fi feel. I would recommend changing their appearance; and
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A lot of the upgrades have really unclear names (such as “dropperA1”), and it’s hard to tell whether some upgrades are merely aesthetical, or actually benefit your tycoon. Either change the upgrade names, I say, or be more descriptive for some of them.
I also have another important thought about your game, that I present to you in the form of a question: what makes your tycoon game different from everyone else’s? If you don’t promote any original or unique aspect of your game, there’s no reason why a Roblox player wouldn’t choose another tycoon over your own. Some tycoons have vehicles. Others have PvP arenas. One even allows complete customization of the path your conveyor takes. I offer but a few suggestions that I thought of whilst playing your game:
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Add a story. It doesn’t have to be complicated, or even that relevant to the player’s experience. It would just answer a few questions. “What am I doing here on this strange world? What is this place? Why am I constructing a tycoon?”
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Promote player interaction. This could range anywhere from player versus player combat, to team tycoons. Since Roblox games are multiplayer by default, I would consider it a waste not to utilize that feature; and
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Give every tycoon upgrade a purpose. Personally, I’ve never understood why a player would want to buy “crates” for $300 if they don’t do anything. For me, at least, playing tycoons typically involves trying to dodge upgrade buttons that have no real benefit. I think it would be interesting if everything helped you in some way. What if, for example, buying crates allowed your base to store more money for you to pick up, later?
And be determined! A good developer never gives up!
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A lot of the upgrades have really unclear names (such as “dropperA1”), and it’s hard to tell whether some upgrades are merely aesthetical, or actually benefit your tycoon. Either change the upgrade names, I say, or be more descriptive for some of them.
As a solution to this, change the button colors, such as Red for Money Making and Yellow for Decorative. for about 4000 of money spent I realized that it was purely aesthetic many improvements
I could do that its not a bad idea. Ill make some buttons that are green for money and like orange if its style and ill make it in the info area.
I have made other droppers better than the one seen in game. If you have discord add me my user is NexoGalaxy#1513 they do look more sci-fi than the one seen in game. I am going to make my button a mesh since the button is made of 8 parts and if you have 100’s of buttons then the part count adds up. So I am going to make some meshes to lower the part count a little more. Also have you tested out the drone yet? It is very cool
No. I just started the tycoon.
oh ok let me know how it goes.
I got it! It does not fly though. How to rise and fall? Also blue lines on the map stop it from moving. Otherwise it’s cool!
The drones are called hover drones. They dont fly they hover a little bit over the ground
The neon blue lines on the map stop it from moving.