This is the second cafe that I’ve built. Please view my previous topic on my profile and you’ll find the images of the first cafe I’ve built. This topic’s purpose is to get feedback on this cafe build. When you’ve seen my first cafe’s images, compare the images to my second cafe’s images, and see if I’ve improved or not. Thanks!
You can give me feedback on what I can add to the cafe, things that look out of place in the cafe, etc. Just feedback in general. Also, if you somehow think the cafe looks like a free model/stolen model or something (Well, it’s not.) Or if it looks pretty bad… understand that I’ve only been building for about 2 weeks.
Random question. Since I can’t figure out whether I’m a low-poly builder or medium-poly builder or whatever… do you guys think my second cafe is low-poly? Or medium-poly?
Hiya! After reviewing your previous build this looks 10 times better however its not the best… If you add a little more detailing to the interior and make the design and and lighting a little more smooth and better i think this could be an amazing build. Like the front view, not so attractive, a little bland and not much detailing, but i do think this is good build! Keep up the work!!
How can I add more detail to the interior? Can you explain it further, I don’t really know how to make it more detailed. Maybe suggest things that I can add to the interior?
This café is pretty decent but the thing that annoys me is that you don’t use any textures, search up in Toolbox " Textures " and put them on your build, it’ll look 10x better and modern instead of Roblox rubbish ones.
Oh yeah, random question. Since I can’t figure out whether I’m a low-poly builder or medium-poly builder or whatever… do you think my second cafe is low-poly? Or medium-poly?
Alright so it’s definitely better then the first version. But there’s some things you can improve.
Change the “Motto” size to smaller and it will improve the cafe model. And you can add more detail to the wall such as textures. Brick texture or wooden floor. And you can add some plants to improve it.
However I think you need to add more plants and textures to the cafe.
Just off the bat, you can tell that this build is 10 times better than your first build. Before the lighting was blinding and now it is on spot. I suggest adding more interior design. You look at the walls and they seem a little bland. Some texture or decoration could really improve the quality and the looks of it. Continue the great work.
