Feedback on my second GFX ever!

Hello everyone! Today i made my second GFX ever! Feel free to comment some feedback or your opinion!

Here is the GFX:


I realized its very bright :high_brightness: Next time i will consider making it slightly less bright!

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Love it but improve on the lighting there is nothing wrong with it being bright the problem that you, me and alot of people make is it being to vague when doing a gfx this I suggest you re-angle it (in these sort of cases I suggest focusing to the side) then at the angle you have focus use a point light to emphasise that area.

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Its super nice for a beginner, although I recommend adding effects maybe using pixlr etc

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I would say that this is OK in some cases, there are a few mistakes in this GFX that make it not good in some cases.

As you can see there, her arm is right through the pillow.
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I think this seems like a first beginner GFX. It is a little bit darker than it needs to be, it isn’t very bright. It really doesn’t seem like a second GFX, it looks like the first one.

Try improving more blender graphics so that it can be fully great to make the thing seem like a good GFX.

I hope this did help you, this is in my opinion. Try having more blender skills and learn more about it.

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What’s wrong? The GFX is pretty bright enough and it’s not very dark. It’s decent and well-made, the only problem was the clipping arm.

For a second attempt it looks great. The design of it is neat and the lighting is on point like the natural colors and less details put into it try coloring it or adding vibrant colors in the background the white approach doesn’t quite look good in my opinion.

I would suggest adding another character in the scene since it seems like enough space to throw another character perhaps talking or interacting with each other something similar to that. At the start it’s a decent attempt since much doesn’t need much. If you still want to continue making it more appealing perhaps experiment with adding picture frames or art something interesting in the background.

Other than that, it’s a decent attempt.

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I also suggest using gloss it make lighting look ALOT better