Feedback on my second GFX

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Hello everyone, I’d like some feedback in my second GFX. Tell me some things I can improve on. Also tell me some things I did good on. Thanks.
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Thanks,
Cats767_99

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It’s a little bland without filters or color correction. The couch looks poorly made and the walls need some texture and bump but overall this is really nice! I am very happy to see you used a rig (something I don’t see often with people’s first gfx)

jazzify approves

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This is not my own building. My friend asked me if I could make a gfx of him on the couch from his game, but thank you for the feedback. I will also note to use color correction and effects; thanks so much.

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why is there a gap:Screen Shot 2021-05-31 at 10.12.06 PM
you need better lighting, the glasses are not positioned properly, the right arm does not look like its attached and overall looks weird. Screen Shot 2021-05-31 at 10.12.31 PM ’

something feels wrong, have smoother lighting

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It is a two piece couch. Sorry if it’s confusing.

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I thought he was sitting on in the corner of a room with a weird wall (no offense)

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To me, some of the posing looks a bit stiff. The arms are fairly good, but it would look cleaner to add some slight bending to the legs and torso so that the character looks more like he’s lounging.

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