(Sorry about the copied to clipboard I was screen shotting very fast lol)
Anyways give me your opinions and what could be added, here’s the original game if you want to explore it a bit more Become A Spy Obby (read desc)
All kinds of feedback would be appreciated. Thanks for reading!
I decided on 140 robux but coz I was generous I gave this guy 1120 robux lol but it was meant to be 140 and if it needs more stuff he’s happy to do more work probably coz I over payed him lmao
This is DEFINITELY not worth 1120 Robux. At max it would be worth 100-200. It’s literally just frames and text boxes inside of each other, it would take about 5 minutes to complete the whole thing, including the button scripts. If you ever need more work I recommend finding somebody else and getting what your money is worth.
I would pay 50 robux at max for this UI, nowhere NEAR 1120, 1120 can go into somebody with much better skills, just saying. The UI is bland, badly spaced and positioned. Fonts are wacky. The colors are not that good, the UI is generally bland, and the sharp, rectangular frames with borders are not good.
Dude @MasterGameCreator01 you just got scammed… that shop UI is very simplistic, my 8 year old brother can do that in like 2 minutes take a look at this UI I made in 5 mins you overpaid the dude for really low quality work you should have given him like 50 robux for that P.S. there is supposed to be a viewport frame where the word katana is
I agree that this GUI isn’t so good. Even me could do this much better. Some suggestions I have are…
The buttons are too small, especially when the frame is too big. Try filling up all of that empty space…
Make your edges rounded, that would look more “relaxing”.
Use a variation of color. I see that your UI designer did that a little bit, but could do more of it.
You could afford to add an image to some of them using what I believe is called ImageLabel?
(Of course there’s a lot more you could improve on it; these were just some large factors I saw immediately after looking at the UI).
Also, just a general rule, the better something looks, the more likely I am going to buy it.
I wish I was that guy, for real though, he put very little work into something to get 1k+ Robux??? Even if it was a perfect cartoonish-like shop UI, I wouldn’t price it at 1k, that’d just be like 250-500 robux at max. What he made you, you could’ve done yourself in a matter of minutes, spending no robux into it whatsoever. For ease, anyone could’ve done a much much better job with less payment.
I find this SUPER basic, you’ve not spent time making the GUI itself. I feel if you spend more time on the GUI this would be good!
What I mean by “spend more time” is to not only make the GUI rectangles. That’s the default GUI, maybe some more circular shapes" also look at other GUI’s in big ROBLOX games, like arsenal or adopt me. And try to do something like that “Don’t actually copy it, take some things that make the games GUI good, and try to implement it yourself!”
Hope you take my criticism friendly and not in a mean way! Meant it that way, keep it up!
Doesn’t really look very good for it to be 1k+ robux. This would take someone about 3-5 minutes to make. It’s just frames and text, you could’ve got something way better for 1k robux. Also I am not really sure what the theme is but if it is a cartoony theme, it does not look cartoony so I recommend you hire someone else or remake it.
