Feedback on my Shop

Hello there,
I was working on the low poly shop and I wanna show you guys and is it good in your opinion. if you do… can you send me a reply and if you want me to add something, you can reply to me.
anyways here is the photo of it:


and if you enjoy the picture don’t forget to like just to let you know :wink:
anyway, I think that all for now and I will see you next time…
Seeya!

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Nice looking shop @RISING_ROBLOX, you did good on the low poly. :+1:

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Looks really great!
But there’s one small thing. Those fake lighting effects on the windows look a bit copy pasted, maybe you can change them up a little bit?

Have a nice day! :grin:

sorry but i make the fake lightning effect but thanks for the reply and before i forgot i not copy somebody.

I really like it although, the “SHOP” text looks a bit weird. I am not sure if it is the size, color, or font. You should try changing up the text a bit and see what looks best.

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I actually like it! It looks like a Low Poly shop a lot.

Do you have plans for what this game is “Called” so I might be able to visit when it opens?

i don’t know yet what game i gonna call but i gonna build a map soon… i think

Looks nice. Colors are quite bland and it has quite a lot of windows, looks more like a gym to me. God work

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hey is it good sign to call it gym?because it almost look like it

It’s not good nor bad, it just looks more like a gym to me :smiley: also, the glaze is not connected and this is really displeasing to me. Maybe its just OCD, hope this helps

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Nice shop. I do think that the colours for the shop walls could be brighter cause the other things such as the trees which are generally associated with brighter, more fun colours. I always recommend this website to people when they make builds cause this website which is called coolors, can generate random colour palettes to help you colour your builds, here is a link:

It is really good, I like the low-poly style. Keep up the great work!

It looks really nice considering the style you were probably going for. The additions like the palm trees really make it stand out. It’s great.

That looks really amazing, I love how you mixed low poly with modern style and I think it turned out pretty good. I would definitely say this is a high quality build and I don’t know if I would want to change anything.

Looks great, I like the low poly design. Great work.

I love that low poly shop :+1: Look’s pretty good to me.

Some things you might want to improve or fix…
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Maybe make it center? Might not be noticable but might be nice to have it center.

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If you don’t want it just flat grass and tree give it some grass mesh or rocks. :+1:

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Give the wall some texture? Like the brick kind of texture. (Or something)

Those were some suggestions but I really love your low poly shop. Keep working on it :+1:

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Wow! I love it. Great job Rising_roblox. You are a very good builder! We should make a game sometime in the future.

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thanks, @shinee_suju I really appreciated that and also I m sure we can make the game sometime in near future and thanks for your reply.

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that isnt what he said, he thinks that you just copied the decal from a window then pasted it on another, trying make each panel different in some way.

um… i not put decal i just use parts and i make it by myself and i not copy somebody