Feedback on my short subway animation

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#1

DISCLAIMER

  • Some of the textures aren’t mine
  • Don’t bug me about the head movements at the end. It was an accident.
  • I know some of the textures kinda don’t match what a subway would look like. But I want to gain enough feedback before I update it. It took 1 day, or 24 hours to render

Here is the render


I think the dev forum compressed it a little
And yes nanosph, I used PBR textures.

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#2

I think the head movements at the end kinda add to it, but really all I could say is possibly change how the windows look? Maybe more dirty or with some graffiti? Don’t put too much stress on it tho as like, 24 hours is a long time.

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#3

why helmet? the face inside is weird. flickering lights also weird. lighting and ambient is very nice though, and posing is realistic and natural. i can’t say i love the set design though :confused:

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#4

Looks great. PBR kid is happy.

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#5

Love it!

Honestly looks phenomenal! Everything about it is just perfect for that short render: the lighting, the quality, and the scenery!

I personally would see you making game trailers in the future! :eyes:

Keep up the great work! :sparkles:

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#6

Because that’s the Roblox avatar?

Pretty sure that’s to emphasize the movement of the train, but yeah I agree with you, trains have lighting on the inside that is usually much stronger than the lighting outside the train.

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#7

Cant u understand what animator want to express
Its is like there are enemies behind the guy that is why he is scared and has a helmet. The flickering light is a train passing by. I think the guy is in another train which dont have electricity.