Feedback on my showcase games

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#1

Hello, I’ve been working on my 2 first showcase games. The other one has existed for a while now but the work on the Library started recently. Does anyone with more experience have any tips or tricks that could either make the games look better or reduce workload when it comes to making these games, I’d also appreciate some creative feedback on what kind of areas could fit (either of the games) because i’ve kinda not gotten any good ideas for new areas.

Both games are also public for those interested in the full experience.

Caves:

Caves_7
Caves_71915×786 24.4 KB

Cave_5
Cave_51910×792 413 KB

Cave_8
Cave_81894×795 427 KB

Caves_6
Caves_61910×763 31.1 KB

Library:

Library_2
Library_21916×799 61.5 KB

Library_3
Library_31908×861 45.3 KB

Library_1
Library_11909×791 88.4 KB

robloxapp-20221202-1405406.wmv (146.0 KB)

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#2

Honestly, there’s not much feedback for me to give.
The builds are quite impressive.

Oh but, if I may ask, are the bookshelves meshes or actual models stacked atop eachother?

#3

Oh god, imagine the part count if they were actual models xdd. They are meshes luckily.

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#4

Ah, alright.
After looking into the library one a little longer, I am still impressed. The clock part is incredibly interesting.