Hi, i made a low poly forest with some kind of Tribe village huts and such! And i thought i needed feedback from the devforum folks.
You can also play it here: Peace (Showcase) - Roblox
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I like the detail and design, looks really nice if you’re going for that village kinda of feel I do have a couple of suggestions.
I’ll try to place some props around where the houses are at like wells, boxes, stacked logs, rocks equipment, barrels act. There could possibly be a well in the middle of the area with other equipment on the side of the house’s I am not sure if you’re already planning adding that, but it seems like it should be part of the map. I’d recommend adding other types of vegetation and trees on top of the mountains to make it feel less empty.
I would suggest adding more nature like flowers, around. Maybe some river plants or rocks underneath the bridge so it could look like they’re crossing a river going to different house’s that’s if you want that added to your showcase. However the nice view and details placed around the whole map looks nice I do think you could create different varieties of trees instead of duplicating the same trees around the whole area.
Other then that, I believe your showcase has a nice feel of a peaceful atmosphere you’re currently aiming for nice job.
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Love what you did overall. The game is very peaceful and relaxing. I would suggest creating various “huts” to make the game a little bit more original. Adding a little bit more vegetation would also help.
Good work. 
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Excellent suggestions! Thanks for the feedback.
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Will try! Thanks for the suggestions.
its nice, i like it but i think that the clash of realisam and cartoony style could be better, couse it looks a bit wierd, looks like some AR stuff
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In terms of your overall design I love it, you for sure made a really good scenary build/map. Now in terms of some tweeks I would make, I feel like the trees do not really match the overall style of the build. This might be just me but looking at the trees I feel like they are a bit too simplistic compared to the map its self.
This may just be something to take into account, though great job on the build and I may add a bit more detail to the houses as well to make each one unique.
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Oh, just trying something new, thanks for the feedback!
That looks really nice! 
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Hi there,
This looks spectacular, it looks like it’s from a mobile game, I have some game suggestions that you might want to add into it;
suggestions
- I’m unsure if you have this, but a day and night cycle
- Wild animals coming out and warriors having to fight
- Campfires
I would personally use the things I said above as when it’s released, or if it’s released it gets a lot of members as it is unique.
things I would change
- The bricks/pattern on the side of the huts, you should make it not patterned and they should be out of order.
hope you take my ideas into further consideration
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Hello!
Your low poly looks cool!
One thing I would change:
I would work on the appearance of this building.
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That’s what i thought! I will make sure to change it to a much better ones.
Yup, will do. Thanks for the suggestion!
btw im sorry if my feedback post seemed a bit negative, i didnt mean it like that. its realy cool
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Looks nice, you should probably add a campfire next to the cabins, and more decoration in general as it looks way too filled up with trees.
Overall, it’s really great! Keep up the amazing work, you’re truly talented.
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Just wow! The talent level here for you is really fantastic. The terrain is well designed, the models are really good. I would follow jordonh23’s advice.
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Thanks! And yes, already did, can’t wait to publish it!
Sorry if someone has said what I’m about to say in another post.
It looks really good! This is mostly personal opinion and what I would do and small details.
The trees aren’t very real looking. I would add some things outside of the houses and around the map. In photo 3 theres a hill but nothing on it so I would put some trees or something on the hill. Another thing about the trees is that they are all the same so try to change up the height and shape and everything. You could add some windows to the houses. If you’re going for a time when they didn’t have glass then you could just add like holes in the wall if thats possible. You could put some rocks or whatever around the path to make it less plain. On the roofs of the houses you could add like a chimney or something to change up the houses as well. For the second photo you can smooth out the edges. You could also add a fence on the path.
Overall its really good! I’m not a builder I’m more into scripting but this is just what I think. Good Job!