Feedback on my simulator map

Hi all, this is a simulator map that I’m working on and I’m hoping to do all aspects of the game myself including scripting and ui design.

Please bear in mind that I am not a builder primarily, any criticism is welcomed no matter how harsh.
All assets are made by me except from the textures.

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im not a 3d modeler but this looks pretty descent and simple to me

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Looks a bit TOO simple, it doesnt look enough “Alive”. The whole spawn needs to be redone imo.

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ah ok, what do you recommend i fill the space with? i have issues with this sort of stuff.

I do like it even though it looks simple, it catches pretty well the style of other simulator game map styles. The only thing that i don’t really like that much is that it feels a bit empty, but i suppose that feeling could be fixed with some ambience settings and brightness to make it feel more alive.

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Thanks for the feedback! What can I do to fill up the space some more? Perhaps a VIP area and a leaderboard area?

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That would fit well, other things could be more structures perhaps? like one or two more houses around the map? I’m not too sure what to suggest so i guess what you said should be enough.

yeah that’s my plan, a couple of houses dotted around the map and some vip areas.

thanks!

This looks good! But I think it’s needs more trees/grass.

Thanks! I’m definitely going to be adding more scenery objects to fill the area up, I think some grass dotted around the area will make it look much better :slight_smile:

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Your skills of making stuff is good! I can’t wait to see what you make next!

thank you so much! defo going to make more games including a vibe game

so i added some more objects, next i’m going to redo the sell and buy area as they let the standard of the map go down

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Looks very good! 10/10! :smile:

That does look way better than before, well done!

Thanks! Any tips for the sell/buy shops?

I agree with what Neo said. I also think that the brick tiles do not match the look of it. You should also change the skybox, it looks too basic. You also could add more to the buildings.

I really like the build, but personally, I don’t like the colors you have going.

I think you would benefit from a brighter skybox and darker grass and trees.

I also think the cobblestone material you have going on in front of the shops could be replaced with the brick texture/color of the paths and would look better but maybe I am wrong on that one.

thanks for replying!

definitely taking the colours into consideration and will be modifying them as i too feel like they were too bright

and about the cobblestone, i will definitely try that and update you!

the path texture will be changed, i have had multiple people tell me this now, thank you for helping!

it’s currently the default skybox so i’ll be changing that and the buildings are getting removed in favour of more detailed structures :wink: