Feedback on my small city and what should I approve more

Hello, Roblox devs I have made this small city and I need you guys see it and let me know what should I improve more of my city. Thank you bye.

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It looks way too plain, empty and blocky, add more detail and use more wedges

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Hi, it looks like a simple build, I like it. You could add more details. A good day . :wink:

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Blocky buildings to me aren’t an issue, it’s what you do with the decoration that is an issue.

Your windows seem to be made of neon which (to me anyway) looks unattractive and draws me to the actual building itself, which isn’t going to help the game experience (if this even will be one, correct if im wrong but it’s just a build?).

The road should include more detail than just a concrete slab with yellow going through it, it doesn’t hurt to split it up a little bit.

You seem to be running on low rendering settings, for pictures ALWAYS set it to the highest as you won’t get the pixellated edges like you are right now.

Sorry if this was too long!
Keep going, really promising right now.

kyro

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So what should I do with the windows?

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Change the texture to something that doesn’t attract attention. However, if you like it then I see no reason for you to change it. Just my personal opinion.

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Pretty nice I guess, I think you should add some wedges, maybe more cars, it’s pretty plain… You may want to fix that, here are some suggestions:

  • Make Road Smaller
  • Add Trash Cans
  • Add Empty cups on ground(Garbage)
  • Add NPC’s
  • Add dirt behind the buildings, aswell as grass.(Instead of black concrete)
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Maybe you can add a tunnel where the road ends. Just seems like it’s missing something. The road also seems super big compared to the cars on the side. You can also try adding fences next to / behind the buildings. Other than that it looks good.

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Why is the road so giant compared to the cars