Hello ! I made a tycoon ( not really original I know but I tried to do innovative things ). I would love if I could get some feedback !
The game is “abandonned” because of bad coding at the start that would take too long to change but everything should work.
Hello!
Your game looks pretty good in my opinion.
Things I liked:
-GUI. It’s simple enough and practical.
-Idea. I like the idea that you implemented on this game, it’s not something repetitive and boring. It’s original.
Things that could’ve been better
-Map size(?). The map kinda looks small. A server can contain up to 4 players, but I think the map might be way too small for them. If there’s something like specific plots for specific players, then I guess it’s okay. But it looks pretty small, my tycoon covered 80% of the map.
-Script-related problems. When I opened the GUI, I saw 2 categories called “Machines” and “Items”. The “Machines” section works great, however I think there’s a problem in the “Items” section. It shows up machines instead of items, so I guess that’s a script-related issue.
-Skybox. Skybox needs some improvement, considering that your idea about this game is pretty original. It would be better if you used a better skybox.
Overall, it’s a good game and there’s always room for improvement. I wish you good luck on your path of roblox studio.
It is a good game but the map is small and there is only one tycoon able to fit on the map.
Thanks for the very contructed feedback, I actually have another version that I just uploaded but I think some things might be broken. I tried to change the skybox but to be honest I just took one that I could find, I don’t have the skills to make one myself
Yes, I just changed it to another version but it may have some bugs in it, thanks for the feedback !
Hello.
Your game is very basic, simple UI and mechanics, nothing much to look at building wise.
Here’s some things you can improve:
- The overall aesthetic, it feels very grey and sad.
- In terms of mostly everything, there’s nothing really to do except wait and press W to walk to a button. Perhaps add other aspects to it like an obby or upgrades, if you do XYZ then you get “holp” faster…
- No music?
- Building/scripting/UI could be improved, players need to be interested by your game, kept on the hook long enough to play it and keep coming back. If you’re in a tycoon game and the game is 90% waiting and 10% pressing W as well as there’s nothing to even really look at, they won’t come back.
I think you should continue the game as long as you’re interested in it and have fun in doing so. For everytime a game gets hard or something gets complicated and you’d just give up, you’re never really going to achieve true success but keep working on it and you may prosper as well as learn new things. hope this helps
Thank you for the feedback, I think I may work on it again after my other project thanks to your message. The game is lacking a lots of things but that’s because I “abandoned” it. I’ll make things to do while the “holp” goes up !
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