Feedback on my soccer/football GFX

I’m currently working on a soccer/football experience and I’d like to share with you guys my GFX.

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Looks really great, though it could improve.


Flaws:
Firstly, the soccer ball looks bizarre. Its edges seem too sharp and the texture doesn’t look like a soccer ball (not sure if this is intentional or not).
Secondly, it’s quite hard to make out what’s happening in the environment/background. The floor looks like a smooth flat plane, and the there isn’t really much except that. I think it would be better to add more to the environment so that the scene makes more sense.
Lastly, I think it could look pretty cool if the character’s clothing either had a normal map or simply becomes a 3d object, it’d add a lot more emphasis to the image.

Boons:
The editing looks amazing, though. The little particles and the - correct me if I’m wrong - sort of radial blur around the character and ball. The lighting looks good, and everything overall fits together pretty well.


Nice job!
:wink:

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Yeah, it’s intentional. I’m making a sort of futuristic style experience.

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Wink as in I did not do a great job?

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No, just felt like adding a wink, it’s a nice emoji.

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That looks really good! I like the colors and theme of the GFX.

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