Feedback on my Star Wars Imperial Base/Outpost?

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#1

Heyo!
I’m Mark, and I’ve been working on a star wars game recently.

I built this Star Wars Imperial Base/Outpost in ROBLOX studio and I wanted to know what I could improve on, and what you guys think of it.

I wouldn’t call myself a top tier builder, I’m just trying to improve in any way I can!

Any feedback is appreciated, thanks!

Here are the pictures!

Front view
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Left view
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Right view
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Turrets
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Large turret
Inside of main building
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Tower Screenshot_14

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#2

Very cool just looks the movie

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#3

It looks alright but at the same time it looks like something from a 2014 to 2015 game.

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#4

Yeah it kinda looks like that :slightly_smiling_face:

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#5

It’s pretty good! One thing I would change.

Make the grass either more green, or white. Also, add terrain decoration to the grass (enable by going to Workspace > Terrain > DecorationsProperty)

One more thing, use ShadowMap technology. If you are, then turn on Shadows.

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#6

I like it but it needs to be more detailed.

#7

Thanks, haha. Once I learn blender I’ll probably remake it in there to make it more realistic!

#8

Thank you! I’ll definitely add this to the build. :smiley:

#9

Okay, thanks for your feedback! :smiley: I’ll work on making it more detailed. If you have any suggestions of what to do more then please let me know! :slight_smile:

#10

Thanks! I’m a huge star wars fan and wanted to recreate something like this in a star wars game, I’m actually making it off of a star wars series so yeah most of the inspiration comes from that! :grin:

#11

Add shadowmap or voxel, It’ll make the buildings look more realistic. Right now it looks like it came out of 2015. Otherwise good job

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#12

I set the lighting to shadowmap, which it was already on voxel, but I see little to know difference in the build and don’t see a shadow on the objects, when cast shadow is on. Any help? Also, thanks!

#13

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Make sure Global Shadows is checked

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#14

Hmm, that’s checked on too. It seems like all the terrain canyons and landscapes I created all cast a shadow, and when I click off the Global Shadows section I can visibly see no shadow on the landscapes, but the parts and bricks themselves aren’t casting a shadow, and when I uncheck GlobalShadows I see no difference. I’m not sure what’s the problem.

#15

Oh, silly me. I just figured out it was due to my graphics level settings. Thanks for the help though! Much appreciated :slight_smile:

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