Feedback on my test build

Am working on this test build, was requested to expand it some more into a full house and will be doing that later. Might even be turning this into a full game.
For now, what do you think of this test build I made here and what are some things I can improve on this build?



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The one thing I don’t like is how the pillow is a plastic material. Other than that I think it’s really good!

I’d really like to fix that, but roblox is doing something weird with the smooth plastic texture and so I can’t fix it. I can’t find any other materials either that fit better.

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Ah ok that makes sense. I’ve had similar problems with my models as the material glitches.

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looks decent, but the lighting is too harsh, the shadows are really sharp as well, make the shadows soft and make the intensity of the light softer please
also it feels a bit cramped so add more space too
other then that, I like it, looks nice

Not bad! Although a couple of things you could fix:

  • The Lighting is way too bright, that switch light is the equivalent of Light Theme geez

  • It’s a bit small for a room, might wanna add a bit more & expand the size of it perhaps?

  • Ok who sets a bed that’s blocking the window behind them what, you might wanna fix that as well?
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Overall though, it’s pretty good!

Also why does the room look like it’s half eaten (I know it was just for show, but still looks weird lol)
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how did you make the blanket curve
:exploding_head:

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Mabey change the blanket material, it looks more like carpet then a blanket.

Great job!

You might want to hang some paintings on the walls.

Honestly I’m not all that good at texture design and don’t know what else to change it to.

The harsh lighting I will get to working on, the softness of the shadows as well I don’t have control over. I am going to get to working on improving the lighting just a bit.
I’m not trying to build a large mansion either, just a small house and thus the room is not going to be large by any means, although the room is going to expanded soon.
Thank you for the rest of your feedback though.

its ok, but if you could go to lighting and adjust the settings of how dark the shadows are there, that would be coolio

but yeah cool build ngl

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The Lighting is way too bright

Yup thank you for pointing out what to specifically fix about the lighting.

It’s a bit small for a room, might wanna add a bit more & expand the size of it perhaps?

I plan to expand the room soon.

Ok who sets a bed that’s blocking the window behind them what, you might wanna fix that as well?

I once had a room like that… should I just move the bed somewhere else?

Also why does the room look like it’s half eaten (I know it was just for show, but still looks weird lol)

I plan to expand the room to instead of it being this cube thing to be an actual interior of a house.