Feedback On my the flash icon

Hello I am blood007lol and i made two logo for a flash game
What is the best
the first

or the second

Reply For what is the best logo

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These logos are very good! I personally prefer the second, but the first is more accurate to how when he runs everything becomes a blur. Awesome work!

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Thanks you for your reply and see you soon :sparkling_heart::sparkling_heart::heart::heart:

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I really like the render and all the effects, it looks spectacular. The only thing I would change is the text. It looks like Arial text from MS Paint lol. Maybe add a drop shadow, make it 3d etc

Basically, make the text catch your eye a bit more.

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in the first photo, it looks like you just used one of those ā€˜special’ brushes and dragged the photo to the left. it looks like he’s underwater, not running. i would try making it look blurrier than it is wavy-like. another thing is that the pose overall doesn’t look like he’s running. there isn’t much motion or action. make try making it look like he’s running more. lastly, the text is awful imo. the yellow and red are giving me mcdonald’s vibes. try using complimentary colors or just simple white, grey or black. but, this is all my opinion so you don’t have to agree or listen to it. great job!

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I prefer the 2nd, the blur kind of messes up the photo a bit on the 1st in my opinoin. If you want the impression of him running, maybe do some lines that imitate movement? idk

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Thanks you for your reply and a mcdonald’s vibes lol :rofl::joy::joy:

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LOL ofc! i’ll follow you to see more of your work! great job on your icons though!!

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the second one is better it just needs to be a 3d render improve the background, and make the lightning look more real.

and make the font better

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I like what you’re trying to do with the first one, but to me it sort of looks like he’s underwater. And unless you can fix that, then I’d say that the second version is better. Other than that, keep up the good work friend!

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I think for my opnion the first icon looks very awesome but I think you should change this part behind the character

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and put something that looks like he’s running very fast

Another thing is that you should out making the icon in the good ol 3D app called ā€œBlenderā€ where you customize the shading of the lights, rotate the camera to -35 and many other stuffs. Once you finish this, try to put in a photo editor some effects and add the name ā€œThe Flashā€ with very awesome font.

Hope you can make this first icon very cooler and awesome!

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I think the second one! The warpy wiggly effect doesn’t really look like he’s running, it looks a bit odd. It was creative though! I would still prefer the second one. :smiley:

First is far superior in my opinion. Although, I feel like the text font can be improved.

I like the first, but it would look better with less blur, and maybe a slight yellow/red trail behind him

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Everything looks great, but personally I’d add some sort of screen effects and some sort of nothing blur to make it more appealing to others.

I like the 2nd one and btw the font is kind of flat to me… I would say add a bit of a Stand Out kind of font. You know what I mean…

Love it, but maybe have some more PIZZAZZ! The text is very plain and looks like a font that my college teacher would use for a PowerPoint slideshow. Maybe try some fatter text, and make it cartoony text too. Otherwise, looks great to me!