Feedback on my the new version of the TV

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#1

Hi! :wave:
Today I made another version of my first model which I published in the devforum. This is a TV.

First Version:

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Second version:

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Which version is better?

Bye! :wave:

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#2

TV looks good! Second version is better.

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#3

Beautiful! Version 2 is better.
Good luck to you!

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#4

Nice Tv! :grinning: I think the Tv 2 is better

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#5

It looks good! I can see the improvement so far. The second version looks better for me.

Here are my suggestions:

-The beans look repetitive try adding other miscellaneous items.

-The shelf is too thin, make it slightly thicker.

-Your build looks blocky. Try experimenting with other shapes such as a sphere, cylinder, and wedge (ignore this if you’re going on a blocky style).

Example:

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TV references:

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#6

wow really nice tv i would love to netflix and chill on it :smiley:

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#7

These screenshots of different TV models are so realistic. It just feels like your not at ROBLOX right now, is because of the realistic graphic, etc. Very well done on making these TV models and changed the lighting. :+1:

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