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#1

It’s a game about humans versus AI-controlled zombies, just like your typical infected games,

the reason is that I decided to do this instead of using my time on a “Find the…” game that I quickly got bored of, I think spending my time on something I care about is better as I won’t lose motivation as swiftly.

Anyways, here is the thumbnail(I don’t have much experience with Roblox thumbnails, really only touched Unity before, it’s been such a long time since I touched Roblox Studio, so feedback is very appreciated, thank you):

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Edit 1: Game link, barely even started, and the enemy NPC is a free model, I haven’t got around to scripting enemies yet.

Edit 2: What the game contains right now(If you could even call it that)

  • Two gears, both based on Roblox gears
  • The one based on Bombo’s knife’s animation is bugging out sometimes and I will fix it in the future
  • The Spy Eye gear was broken, and it also didn’t close the UI when the user died while using it, hence it’s a completely new script excluding the animations
  • A low-poly model of an explosive barrel that could roll
  • The sea killing the user because of your inability to swim
  • A piece of land, with no houses because I didn’t even start building much yet
  • A stack of papers explaining the references of each gear
#2

I really like it! :smiley: Because I don’t have too much information about the game I don’t have anything to say, good work! :smiley:

#3

Thanks for your reply, sorry about that, even right now, the game is highly unfinished, the only part I even did were just two gears and fixing them(Due to their original Roblox gear breaking due to Roblox’s new updates).

I’ve added a link to my experience now, and the enemy right now is meant to be just a zombie, but I didn’t have time to complete it today, hence I used a free model enemy to replace the infected there.

#4

Ok, it makes sense that it’s still not done, I like the idea of the game (even though I didn’t try it yet) and I have a few tips, you know, a lot of games look the same or are the same (take as an example all of those obbys) so I think that to make your game not look like all of those games, but other than that I can’t really give you anymore tips because of the game not being in Alpha still, hope you are gonna make it! :smiley:

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