Feedback on my thumbnail using a FamasF1

I have used this background before, but what do you think of this one using the Famas F1? I feel like the textures a bit off, but what do you guys think?

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there are no details, like there are no indents and it looks very flat.
here is a real famas-
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as you can see, the grip in the thumbnail u made doesn’t look ergonomic like the real one.
Screenshot 2023-08-08 at 5.37.22 PM
(trigger guard)
Screenshot 2023-08-08 at 5.37.46 PM
the trigger guard is flipped
also the color variation isn’t much like pure black but in the real one there are parts of grey in there
also where is this??-
Screenshot 2023-08-08 at 5.41.52 PM
Screenshot 2023-08-08 at 5.44.47 PM
this part looks flat with no texture.

but overall this is actually good

I WILL GIVE THIS A STRONG 7/10 AS IM NOT GOOD IN MODELLING OR ANYTHING LIKE THAT

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im pretty sure that is a low-poly

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I think it looks amazing. Great Job! :slight_smile:

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I read every issue and I must say a lot of it is my fault. The “missing” part is there, its just silver so you cant see it. The grip im not sure what you mean. And the middle area im not sure what I could change.
As for shape itself the reference I used seemed 1:1.

Edit: yeah sorry the missing part is missing, I somehow deleted it on accident.

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Thank you! Though I have to say myself I could change some stuff.

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Yup, its not meant to be 1:1 realism.

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It looks good! You should add some texture and detail to the Famas though.

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It looks good but i would apply some roughness to it or if its low poly add some more curves to the side and a reload part

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