Last night iv’e started working on a train thats currently unfinished. And i would like to hear some feedback on it before i continue developing this train with more freights. and
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The wheels could be just a bit thicker. Is there an interior? If not I’d make the windows not transparent. Also I think the steam exhaust should be in front of the train not on top? Overall it’s quite good, the colours blend in well, probably just a few revisions here and there.
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The front looks like to much of a triangle. Maybe make it rounder?
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Looks really good, you can add some light in the front and at the middle. Of the top try adding a whistle in the back of the chimney, and you can make the connecting rod a bit more bigger and add the safety valves and top feed. Over all it’s quite good, Hope to see the final build soon.
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I’m not sure if you were going for the triangle look(although it looks like you are by the looks of the windows!) but in my opinion it looks great! That’s a cool different approach to trains and you make the style work. Good on you 
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I would definitely recommend making the wheels kinda pop out from the actual model. Maybe add a front grill / bumper ( like what you would see on a trains front ) maybe add a head light like a real train has and even a car behind like a coal box area. Where coal would burn. Overall pretty good!
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It looks pretty good. The only things that i would add are some lights to it and more detail to the car. The only other thing is that the train in sinking into the tracks. I would place the train on top of the tracks. I would also add a smoke particle emitter to the exhaust. Overall its good, cant wait to see the final product!
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The train seems TOO small to me. Also, you should add more windows and doors. Other than that, it’s a cute little train.
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Not a personal fan of the flat nose feature of it, nor the pointy triangles, but aside from that I think it is pretty good!
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