Feedback on my Turn-based RPG

I made this little turn-based RPG.
What do you think of it so far?
Here are some leaks I posted to my friends while working on this. (Hopefully I put the links right)

https://gyazo.com/5be57969ca9e11442d2690aa7b3eb6ad

https://gyazo.com/4493142f22587507cafd26c3b4505717

Game link: (8) Facing Destiny X0 (Turn Based RPG) - Roblox

If you can, please give suggestions for Facing Destiny X1 (It’s going to made to play in one sitting)