Feedback on my Undertale "Toby's Room" Build

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#1

Hello there. First DevForum post…

So I recreated the iconic “Annoying Dog Room” from Undertale. Within the game itself, it’s an Easter Egg after the credits are completed.

I would like some constructive feedback on my build. What should I change? What could I do better?

Anyway, here is the place. I also provided a reference picture for comparison. I tried to make it accurate as possible, while also adding my own personal touches.

https://www.roblox.com/games/1307789853/Undertale-Tobys-Room

Mysterious_Door_location_dog_room

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#2

Not bad just next time try to make it actually look like the picture. Like 2d styled game.

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#3

I love it! The room looks very comfortable and like the dog room, good job!

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#4

Thanks for the feedback!

Yes, I did try to copy the specified picture. However, the room itself would’ve been a bit bland/boring. So that’s why I personally added some other inclusions. Just to make the scene more interesting to look at.