Feedback on my vibe or hangout game (cafe)

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#1

Hello, developers! This is my new map for game. I need to know what can I improve on it
Thank you for your feedback!
https://www.roblox.com/games/6679860708/Cafe-Without-a-Name

#2

Heyy, doesn’t look half bad but its too much Klub Iris like if that makes sense. Thats my opinion!
Maybe Change the color scheme a bit, make it like rainbow or something.

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#3

Thank you for feedback! Yes I tried to use the color scheme like in the Club Iris. Maybe its a good idea to change it :grinning:

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#4

These are screenshots from the game:

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#5

It doesn’t look bad. I agree with @u_lsen, try changing the color scheme.

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#6

tbh the areas in the first two images need more details. they’re kinda plain.

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#7

Its not bad, but two things. The colour scheme means that you can’t really see much detail. Also just spawning out front in the grass seems a bit unfinished, maybe add a road or something out there.

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#8

Thank you for feedback! This is improved version of it:

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If you want to see more details:

#9

not gonna lie, you need a certain color scheme or its gonna look like someone tossed around a bag of skittles

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#10

Not really a big fan of players making club games, due to the amount of rules that are broken, but the game looks alright so far. A bit empty, but you can add more details and more objects to fulfill those spaces.