Hey! Just wanted some feedback on my water park (First ever build!) I made everything by myself (Even the slides with a few plugins)
WOW! This isn’t bad for your first ever build. I just feel like you need stairs to get up to the ladders so it seems a lot more natural. I would definitely also change the shape and variation of those bushes. I hoped this helped! 
Thank you! Yeah I used teleporters because I just wanted to get into the swing of things with developing but will for sure use stairs next time! I am also trying to learn to model so I will make the bushes look nicer also! Thanks so much for the feedback!
Okay, this is AWESOME for your first build! I would absolutely play it. Once it’s done can you post the game link in this topic? Thanks! 
Woah, I haven’t played in a waterpark on roblox in a few years. it kinda looks like the old roblox waterpark,also you should work on the lighting overall very good build.
peace,
fried
Your water park is very big and cool! I like this !
It is amazing but I would add diffrent types of trees
Looks nice!
The green balls (terrain?) is an eyesore. It’s copy and pasted…
For the rides itself, they seem pretty standard though some look a bit skinny for players to fit.
There’s not a lot of rides and the white part looks bland
Woah, It’s really shiny. Too shiny in fact.
For a first build it is looking excellent. If you have used 0 free models that would be even more surprising.
Yeah! Just used a model creator tutorial for the Quad (Red Yellow Blue Green) slide 
Thanks for the feedback! Yeah I really am not good with terrain but will get better as I progress!
Of course! Thank you for the feedback 
Thank you for the feedback!!!
Better than I could ever do even for my 30th try.
