Feedback on my Western Map Build!

Hello,

For a long time, I’ve been, slowly, working on a “Western Town/Map” build. If you have any helpful feedback, please use the reply feature below to send it. I will appreciate any help or suggestions! As always, thanks,

Cordially,
IronyDev.


I know there is only one building – I am currently working on more.

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Looks nice.

I’m assuming it isn’t finished, as I would have expected more decoration :stuck_out_tongue:

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Thanks for the support! I am still working on this, but I wanted to get some help to figure out what to make next. :slight_smile:

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Would go for a stable , and a sheriff’s office? Think that would look cool and fit in with your theme.

Around the stable, you could put hay-bales, and boxes :woman_shrugging:

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Is it meant to be low poly? If it is I really like it!

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Very nice graphics, love the low poly builds, keep up the good work man! :heartpulse:

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The build, time and effort you put out into this project really showed. The lighting, landscape and everything, is mapped out perfectly! Good job man!

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Looks really clean! I love the cactuses. Might I suggest maybe giant rock structures or maybe even a more red-sand type part of the map. If this was an Open World game it would be very cool.

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Thanks for all of the feedback and support! I am very grateful :+1:.

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It looks good, but it needs more detail and decoration. Like it’s very empty and plain.
I saw someone else put this, but try to put like a sheriff’s office, or a stable, or a western store/building?

Also, it is way too bright. From the bright colors of the map, it doesn’t really look “western”, but just a desert. I would cool down on the bright colors, and use some other materials than “smooth plastic.”

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Think he was going for low-poly plastic look :woman_shrugging:

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So far it looks great. However, I would suggest changing up the cactus a little. I’m not sure what it is about it but it looks a bit off. I’d suggest playing around with the size of the cactus spikes, and adding more/less of the spikes. The building looks very nice, I like how the fence has multiple different heights. This is a small detail, but I think the font for the word “General” on the building doesn’t fit with the second font for “Store”.

As for things you could add, I think some piles of hay would be nice decor. Perhaps some low poly style horses would look nice with the map.

All in all, it’s a great start, good luck continuing this map! :slightly_smiling_face:

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