Feedback on my woods

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#1

Hello, I am working on a horror game and I would like feedback about the woods I am making.

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#2

does it have enough space for players to go inside?

#3

Yes I tried to make it huge, the woods can fit about. I wanna say, 500 or more players can fit inside of it.

#4

That looks good, but maybe add a cottage or a cave, maybe a river?

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#5

Okay, thanks for the feedback.

#6

leave some source of lighting if morning let some sun rays peak through the spaces between trees
and the maps look populated, great
but the 4th image is that from above?
from 1st the 3 picture looks good
but the last it looks too crowded maybe is that the base like ground or something?
the other three looks kida Great
anyways if u release make sure that it doen’t lag
keep imporving :+1:

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#7

Okay thanks for the feedback. And the sick trees is where campers like to camp at so people know where the campsite is at. Also for the morning ill see how realistic it looks when sunrays peak through trees.

#8

Horror games will require atmosphere.
Read my post for more information LINK

I suggest using more realistic trees. And textures.
→ https://textures.com
If you do not want to download and upload there is a roblox given “forest pack” that is found in the toolbox.
Look forward to seeing this progress :slightly_smiling_face:

#10

sorry if this will sound like sarcasm, but I’m doing it because I want to help you:

  • The leaves don’t look realistic at all, and the textures look too repetitive.
  • Try using some leaves and rocks meshes for improvements.
  • Add some details to the terrain, use different materials, and add custom grass.
  • The logs looks alright, maybe improve the textures a little but it’s just a small thing.

I hope this is helpful to you, good luck out there!

#11

Okay thanks for the feedback, there are some rocks around the place, I might have left them out of the picture. I like the custom grass idea. Also the trees don’t look very realistic is cause I’m trying to keep the Roblox feel with realistic lighting.

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#12

The fact that most of the tree leaves are just Spheres make it look like an infestation of peas

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#13

Lol I’m trying to make it have that Roblox feeling while making it look realistic. But that is true lol.

#14

Lightning looks great, but the huge pine trees seem very identical, you should make different sizes and forms

#15

The pine trees is a different part of the woods, and thanks I worked hard on the lighting.