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#1

Hi , i was working on a tower game script which randomly spawns a particular tower when a timer is starting and when u finish the game a chat message comes saying that particular player has finished the tower. I need feedback on any drawbacks on the thing except the number of levels and if i can add this to my new Portfolio as a work example.
The videos from the game are given below :-



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Please Note : This is for showing as a work example as a scripter.
Thank you for reading :slight_smile:

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#2

Its like Tower of Hell cool good job!

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#3

I didnt script like TOH it randomly spawns one set of Tower and not every level/stage.

#4

Looks great! Although, dang that lag in the recording haha.

#5

Sry for the lag , My pc lags when i record something.

#6

It could use a bit stuff here and there but in total, I like it! :+1:

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#7

After playing it, these are the things I noticed that you should fix:

  • Add floor, grass doesn’t fits for a tower game.
  • Paint the walls less bright but also a little bright, it doesn’t look nice.
  • Try rotating the parts! They are the same, just resized.
  • Make the space bigger, you barely do any effort to reach the top.
  • Why is our character like that?
  • The Timer looks weird, you should move it to the middle and remove its background, probably even paint the text.

I doubt this game could be used for your portfolio. (No offense, just giving my feedback/opinions in it!)

#8

As i said in my description this is based on Scripting and not Building . I added that as a starter Character for a change.

#9

Thank You :slight_smile: , this is just for a work example for Scripting