Feedback on my work


i make this in 30 minutes. Any feedback or advise? because im just bored with making animation for a while :l. And maybe i want to make this as a profile

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The gun grip should be holded inside the arm
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like on this photo.
Everything else is good for that much time.
If u want to spend more time on it, then I would recommend making the building better add some details and making settings for lighting

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I really like the pose, I think it looks realistic

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The house and sky seriously, the character is good

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Maybe make the bag go to the side instead of facing forward, would make it more realistic.

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