I just recently finished creating a lil’ neighborhood for an upcoming project, and I wanted to know if I could have some feedback on it (ex; what to add, change, etc,.)
(P.S. I am already working on some cars to make the street less bare!) :- )
Sorry if the images don’t do much justice! I really enjoyed working on this project though! The only pain was organizing the workspace afterwards, LOL.
I noticed that some of the trees had this unnatural and quite odd leaf color, as shown above. And although I just adore your attention to detail, I also noticed an odd shadow in the middle of the sidewalk . To add to that, on the edge of a handful of the houses, there are these bushes that honestly just seem really out of place. I also noticed that some of the trees where unnaturally tall, so for those I recommend making either the trunk a bit thicker, or just making the tree overall shorter.
Other than that, great job, and keep up the great work!
Power lines shouldn’t be on both sides of the street, it will look odd that way because you’ll almost never see that in real life. I know it’s just because you reused the same set of poles and copy pasted it, but you should try to create a model that you can tile along the same side of the street.
Oh yeah! I have a small variety of greens from light to dark just to keep the grass, other tree colors from clashing too much!
Oh geez, if you’re talking about the random block, that’s actually my mistake LOL it’s a spawn block i forgot to move for the photos! The lines in between are just to give the sidewalk a little more detail too :- )
I do see what you mean, most of the ‘larger’ bushes are placed on the sides of the map (where the houses end) I didn’t do a really good job on capturing an image of the sides LOL… They’re mostly there just to fill in empty space, they’ll likely be removed eventually with future updates!
Thank you for the suggestions though, I’m about to make a few test-changes to see how it looks!
Wow, 10/10. It looks like a very friendly environment to be in and it just looks so calm there. The only thing I see that needs to be added is maybe a blue trash can infront of each house to make it more realistic. Other than that I love it, great job!
The roads look a little off do not really match the road you typically see in a neighborhood in my opinion, but you did a pretty good job other than that
The neighborhood looks great, but I do have a suggestion. You should make the houses look more lived in. Add things like a bike, toys scattered on the lawn, a garden, a tire swing, a soccer ball, etc. The houses should give you some insight of who lives in the houses.
It’s really good, the only thing I noticed is that theres too many power lines, I’d suggest getting rid of some, it’s weird seeing them so close together.
Thank you!
Also, I appreciate your suggestions but that wouldn’t be fitting to add all that stuff for an upcoming game (having really unnecessary assets) & that would be a lot of stuff added into those small lawn! The houses aren’t really suppose to “looked lived in”.
If this were a showcase I could totally see where you’d be coming from, however, it’s not! Again though, still appreciate these suggestions!
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Wowzers! You did a spectacular job, however, you do need to fix a few things within your Neighborhood such as adding a mountain range or density in the background instead of the map just cutting off and ending a few studs away from a house.
7/10, the neighborhood is not bad but I recommend you to add few details to increase the graphics and reality of this creation. In my opinion that’s a good creation. Keep doing your good job.