Feedback on neon Tokyo Alley (WIP)

Hiya Devforum! :wave:
It’s been a while since I’ve really posted anything recently but I’ve been working on one of my older games now that I’m starting to have more motivation and time. I would be glad to hear if there’s any suggestions for what I currently have and what I could add / change. Hope you guys like it!

Game link if you wanna try it out: (HUGE UPDATE) Tokyo Alley - Roblox

(a bunch of) Images of the game:







I originally started work on the game at around late 2020 but in 2021 and 2022 I had to almost completely stop the work on the game due to other more important real life things that I have been busy with. Luckily I am now able to work on the game much more and I am able to get more things done in a shorter amount of time due to being way more skilled than I used to be.

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I have a few more images for a few more changes that have been published since this post. I will probably provide more eventually or whenever another few things are finished.
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So if anyone happens to have any suggestions for more things I could add or change or get rid of, please do not hesitate to reply. (I am slightly low on ideas :flushed:)

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Definitely looks amazing, great work.

If you could try to tweak the transparency of the neon parts to the reduce the blurry appearance.

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For most of the pieces except the really large ones, the blurry appearance is what i was going for actually. But it does make sense to do it for the larger parts like some of the windows or large signs so they are easier to read, thanks for the suggestion! I do plan on eventually changing most of the windows to transparent though and giving everything interiors in the future, so they won’t be a huge issue for long.

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that my friend is amazing. I know nothing about building but this is cool

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So… I did end up getting rid of a lot of the bloom on larger windows, I’m still getting used to it but I think it looks quite nice, (it also seems easier on my eyes idk) what do you guys think?





I also changed more things around the map and fixed a bunch more stuff. (Somehow I am noticing a few things in the pictures that I missed which yes I will fix :+1:)

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