~Hello~
I just made a new GFX! What do you think of it? Do you have any ideas for improvements?
Also: I am pretty new to GFX making
Other GFX I recently created:
Feedback on Halloween GFX - DevForum
~The GFX~
Thank you for the Feedback 
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looks very cartoony, the gun holding posing isn’t great and the gun positioning isn’t either, the face can be better, and so can the leg posing and background and lighitng
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It great so far but maybe try adding more to the background, such as an battlefield if you know what I mean?
So far, everything is great and I like it.
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Hi, thank you for the feedback. What do you mean with the „lighting isn‘t great“ or „the face could be better“? - how could I improve them?
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everything looks hand drawn except face, so make face hand drawn look, and the muzzle flash would maybe temporarily blind and the gradient is kind of weird
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It looks like he’s shooting at the ground and not looking where he is shooting. The lighting is a little off.
Not bad though
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I’m assuming that you made the scenery so that the soldier would be in a fight on a battlefield or something similar to that. If that’s the case:
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Try to make the picture less ‘blurry’ and more ‘clean’ to allow the figure to be much more visible
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Add more detail to the background so the viewer can see where the figure is (add more scenery)
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And tweak the figure’s arms so that they’re smaller, or change the gun, so it’s bigger (this is being said as the arms/gun make it weird because of the size difference)
Apart from that, I think you did an outstanding job, especially since you’re new to GFX’s. Keep up the great work!
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