Feedback on NEW GFX!

~Hello~


I just made a new GFX! What do you think of it? Do you have any ideas for improvements?
Also: I am pretty new to GFX making


~The GFX~


Thank you for the Feedback :smiley:

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I love how it look! The lighting makes it quite interesting :0

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LOOKS smooth, well made gfx i guess

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Put some blood. Legs and hands are quite far from torso.

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This looks fine. I will comment though that a soldier would not be in a high ready stance while not in a firefight and it’s bad practice for this soldier to be pointing his weapon directly at a fellow soldier in case of a negligent discharge.

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Its good :grinning:. The scenery is quite nice and the camera positioning is excellent, but the editing could use a bit of work. Its very clear it was done with a brush in some sort of photo editor(photopea?) and it doesnt blend well nor is very realistic, the smoke overlay is slightly low res as well along with the entire GFX, the rest of the overlays are used very well. I would recommend using more samples and/or a denoiser to make it look more crisp and clear.

Would also make sure to bring his arms and legs closer to his torso. Overall, great work for a beginner, keep it up!

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Hi, thank you for the feedback. Just one question, where do you see that I used a brush? The glow at the characters?

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I said it looks like it, but if I’m wrong correct me.

It was the yellow highlights on and around the characters that looked like that to me.

pretty nice, lighting is too off key, the yellow don’t fit in, and uh the first guy’s arm is inside his TORSO and the posing is also off for the second guy in front

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I think it’s pretty good. Just as Ice (The Person Above Me) said, the mans arm is literally inside of him:
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That can’t be healthy.

I also noticed that this guy’s position looks very odd:
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Something looks wrong with his leg position and movement.
Overall pretty good.
8/10

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