Feedback on new logo

Hi there! I’m Noah, AKA ParticularlyPenguin, and I’m a beginner artist. I’d like some feedback on my new logo. Please reply with some criticism.

Note: You can be as harsh as you want because I’m not going to improve with mediocre feedback that doesn’t tell me at all what I need to fix.

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Well, for a beginner, that is actually pretty good. I do have some feedback, though. After that, I’ll walk you through what I think is good about it so far!

  • At some point, you could add more depth to the text, so it could look a bit more 3D.
  • The colours don’t really fit the theme.

Apart from this, the swords fit quite well with the idea of the game, and the outlines are quite nice. The font looks quite nice too, and I’d love to see a background on it at some point. As I said at the start, it is great for a beginner artist! Also, I recently got into logo design too, and I have watched 2 people for help. Both will be linked below!

GFX COMET creates lots of useful things, with the main point here being text design for logos.
HowToRoblox is the guy who got me into logo design, using a site called “Photopea”.

Link to Photopea:

As I said at the start, it is great for a beginner artist! Keep going, ParticularlyPenguin! :smile:

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I watched GFX COMET and I used Photopea for this. I used the colors because blue, red, and green are the team colors of my game. I’ll try using 3D text in the future. Thanks for the feedback!

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What background would you recommend for this? I’m absolute garbage at picking them.

Well, I’m not entirely sure, sadly. All I can recommend is anything that fits with the idea of the game.

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Hi there! I’ve taken what you’ve told me into account, and I made this logo for my games studio.
NGS
Could you please give me feedback on it?

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I think it’s very good! But… it’s too similar to most studios. Most studio games have a very pop out/colorful type of logo, and most have the same background like this, hear me out… its very good, but I would make something different or unique in which makes it stand out from others.

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What kind of background would you recommend?

Depends what the game is about, if the name has to do with the planet neptune, add a black background and add various planets/stars in the black background to fit space. Or, if it has to do with water, or neptunes trident, add a beach, or neptunes trident. It just has to do with what the theme of the group/game is.

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That is a huge improvement! The colours fit well, and you have a cartoony image of what your group is based off-of to go well with it. I love the wave between the text too! It really adds to the 3D effect. :smile:
My only recommendation is to add a more fitting background. Since it is about Neptune, I would add a background that is more to do with space. Apart from that, you’ve got everything for a good group logo. It’s really nice to see the improvements, once again. Keep going, ParticularlyPenguin! :smile:

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For a beginner artist this is pretty good I love the swords at the top very clean and detailed well. One thing I will point out is the the text color going from a nice dark brown ish grey color and the yellow on the sword handle to a bright blue, red and green color is not a good way of showing off your game logo. I would change the text color to yellow-orange since it has good contrast with the grey background.

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@Cakeymasterluke, I already explained why I used these colors in my previous reply. I know they don’t look the best, but to anyone who has experienced my game, these colors make sense. Thanks for complimenting me, though!

Woah! That looks really nice <3 :slight_smile:
If anything, if you’re trying to stay unique or such, maybe make it a starry sky!
It would match the theme you’re going for. Overall you did such a good job!

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I like the Neptune Studios logo because it follows the color palette! And the logo looks well made!

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