Feedback on new showcase game

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#1

Hey there! I’ve been working on this new showcase game and I could really use your help. It’s still a work in progress, so it’s a bit rough around the edges.

Here’s the link:eternal bliss as the ashes fall | Showcase - Roblox

I’m looking for some detailed feedback. Anything you’ve got, from the big picture stuff down to the smallest details, I want to hear it all.

Just a heads up, I didn’t create the assets, but I did put them together to shape the game. Thanks a ton for taking the time to help me out!

#2

Sorry for the late reply and all. Here are my thoughts on your game so far:

  • Not really a fan of the thumbnail, especially the stretched out border.
  • I don’t get why we spawn so near to the edge of the map? You should stretch the map out as much as possible, such that the edges of the map can’t be seen clearly.
  • Your trees and bushes seem to be slightly above the ground. I would add Roblox’s terrain grass imo.
  • I’m not sure what vibes you’re going for? Personally, I would go for a sunset with a more orangey colour palette. You can play around with the Lighting to see where it goes.
  • Would play around with the terrain even more. Hills and mountains can be used to give a forest-y vibe to your game while helping cover up the edges of your map.
  • There are just trees and plants clipping from your building? I can see trees in your building using shiftlock.
  • I would recommend to alter between the trees used for a more naturally-realistic effect.
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