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Please provide feedback on the render
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hey thats a cool GFX image but the background isnt suit for this.
but the rig is soo cool.
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You should probably add a watermark before sending it here, but anyways I have some feedback for you.
- Why is the character, including the head, hair and shirt, so shiny?
- The blur (motion blur?) in the background is bad, it doesn’t fit the image properly.
- Why is there a apple beside the head?
- The room looks too normal to be lit up by a sun through the window on the left, and the window is kinda bland.
- The character is standing too straight, there can be improvements on the posture (especially the limbs)
Hope this will help you to create better GFX in the future
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- What is the apple for?
- Clothing doesn’t look natural. You tried to make it 3D but you didn’t do it for the pants. Also, the right arm is detailed but the right arm is too simple.
- Character is shiny.
- The blur is bad.
That looks amazing dude! I love the background as well, but one recommendation is to add a watermark. You don’t want people stealing your work!
@FlashFlame_Roblox @RontheDragon204
I removed the shine and the blur and made the whole texture 3d as you 2 suggested does this make it better in your opinions?
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Pretty cool Gfx!
I really like it.
The thing that I reccommend is making the arms realistic and put the rig in a more working enviroment.
Thats it!
Thanks! Fusion
It does look better, but the look direction is very odd. You can try using depth of field blur instead, it will probably look better. But the apple is very random ngl. You did a good job, I like it. I’ll rate it 8.5/10.
P.S. You forgot to add a watermark again.
Two things actually, like @RontheDragon204 have said, add a watermark and reomve those apples on your head, what’s that for?
In a more wow-type, looks like a real life LEGO piece set to me
@ViroGatYT @RontheDragon204 the apples are part of my outfit lol
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Keep the blur in the background, but remove the glossy texture on your character.
The apple looks out of place from the current point of view.
His posture looks really weird, as if he was gonna fall back onto the floor…
I don’t really like his pose. I agree with @Windsonnes that he looks like he’s about to fall. But that could be fixed easily!
The outside should have some sort of setting instead of a hammeh hammeh… HAAAAA from goku
Also whats up with his arms and his shirt is weird with wrinkles actualy the wrinkled part make it look weird
also why does he look like he is about to faint or vomit
7.9/10 Close but to far
I will delete this if it offends you in any way of how you make things.
