Feedback on obby game

Hello guys! I have been trying to create an obby game. This is the start, but it doesn’t really stand out to me. What could I add to it to make it better visually? Feel free to go harsh. Thank you for any help :slight_smile:

EDIT: The dummy is for testing.

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Are their are any checkpoints?

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Design of it looks great, only suggestion I would give is possible changing the materials to maybe all smooth plastic for a more cartoon low-poly look, but that’s personal preference. Keep up the work!

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Yes. The checkpoints don’t autosave, but the obbys will short. Think of it like speed run 4. I have tested and it is fully working.

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I love the bright and colorful design.
To make the game more visually appealing, I’d suggest, for starters, making the “dirt” parts underneath the grass slate. I’d say if you’re going to use materials, use a lot of different ones. Otherwise, make everything smooth plastic and go for a cartoony look. Good work, otherwise!

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Ok! I would Like to add though Some like More Trees

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Everything of the obby looks great, but maybe change the material a bit like what @jackfrcsty said. Still looks great in my opinion. Good luck on your obby game!
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I think this looks a whole lot better. Thanks for the help guys!

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This is pretty good to be Honest!

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