Hello, so I just finished up making an obby and wanted to get a few opinions on what I can appove on before I fully spend money on ads. Here is the game link feel free to reply on what needs to be changed or what the game can do to make it better.
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Hi! The game itself is great. I’m not sure if you meant to leave it like this, but you don’t lose health/get reset when you walk on the red parts on stage 4. Other than that, it’s great!
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Pretty nice game, My 2 main complaints are 1, Stage 4 kill bricks do not Kill and 2, When I got to stage 26 there was a bunch of kill bricks on top of the check point, so when I stepped on the check point I got stuck in a forever loop of death that just hurt my eyes. other then those the game is pretty good
Just checked the game and looks very awesome while playing it! 
But oh boy, we can’t forget about the feedbacks. Let’s start!
The first thing I see is free models which is the Piggy cars, a book, a pencil and a teddy bear as you can see in this image here:
(models inside of the game)
(couldn’t find the teddy bear but pretty sure it’s a free model as well)
Not just that but also in other area of the map, we can see a bed and many others
And this is everything I could find that is a free model in the image below. Now I believe that there’s more than the ones that I shows but cannot find it:
Now having free models that are from official builders by looking at the badge called "
Official Model Maker Badge", it’s all good…
But the rest that are not official from Roblox or other builders can have the risk to change the settings of the game and maybe can get your account deleted. A good example of this is the Roblox YouTuber called Flamingo that back in last year, 2020, he made a baseplate using silly models from Roblox Studio toolbox like granny and objects that I could not remember how they look like. After that, he got banned for inappropriate content
These that you got can have scripts inside that can modificate the functions of the game. Now you can delete them or use plugins that people made stop defend against these hacks in the codes but I prefer doing the traditional way by creating my own stuffs. In case you don’t know how to program, you can call for some help in here from the community or learn a little in some tutorials inside of YouTube
Now talking to the design of the game, I found that there’s areas that are a little bit together like this kill parts in the beginning and other areas. Here’s some examples:
Try to fix this part to make it better;
Another thing that I noticed is that it’s not possible to obtain the secret badge even though it’s in the middle of the bed:
In the vents maze, it’s very giant and could make the users bored and give up trying to find the teleport to another area:
Needs to be in the difficulty of everyone which is easy;
Also, I noticed that there’s a unachored part which is the stage 26 where you needed to pass in a speed part and jumping for the level 27, but since the kill parts are unachored, the result is this:
And lastly for this feedback is that you should hide the areas around the last stage, and what I mean by that is putting some mountains, tunnels and other stuffs to not look empty and also the areas of the obbies like the bedroom, kitchen, garage and also the baseplate of Roblox when you start making your own game:
And that’s it! Everything to make the game better!
Hope my feedback helps you a lot improving the game. I believe that you’re going to make it very awesome soon. Keep doing a great job! 
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Thank you for the great feedback, i’ll definitely be changing a lot!
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Oops forgot to anchor them haha. Thank you for letting me know!