Feedback on outfit loader + shopping map

Its_TylerM · November 4, 2021, 10:14pm

Hello, today I spent about an hour building a shop for my V2 release of my game!

Here are some pictures of how it is coming out:

I really like the way this map is coming so far, the layout of it is one side is going to be an oufit loader, and the other will be a place to shop for premade outfits.

I would like feedback, because I think that this map can be greatly improved.
Please understand that this is not the final product, so I can change/remove this.

If anyone has any idea on what to add on the outfit loader side, let me know I feel like it is very empty and I would like to replace the copy and pasted trees.

Be honest with feedback, be as harsh as you want.

Thank you

Its_TylerM · November 4, 2021, 10:39pm

Update I decided to add streelamps on the outfit loader side:

IceTheOneAndOnly · November 5, 2021, 1:06am

first off, your 3d text font does not match your gui font. it does not look good. the gui is too small and should have a different font, remove the palm trees or make them look better, have better lighting, not so basic building like this, better terraining with the palm trees, better insides of the thing and more photos i want to see

Its_TylerM · November 5, 2021, 6:35pm

Thank you for the ideas, this is the feedback I was looking for.

I have changed the font for both the UI and the one on the wall. I am working on adding more detail to the build, But I wanted it to be minimalist.

What exactly is wrong with the lighting? Maybe it looks better in game?

I’ll send you more photos when I get them, thank you

Its_TylerM · November 5, 2021, 8:28pm

Here is a look with some changes + more images

IceTheOneAndOnly · November 5, 2021, 10:31pm

this font is nice, maybe if you could find a similar font that is lowercase and put it on everything except the try buys? Screen Shot 2021-11-05 at 3.31.57 PM
change those nametags to a better font (BillboardGUI)
change the load user font to the animations font

Its_TylerM · November 5, 2021, 10:35pm

Ok, so thats how you do that!

will do

Thank you for the ideas, you have really helped improve this map so far