Feedback on Personal Artwork

Hi!

I’ve been quite inactive as of late due to college & irl things. However, I’ve taken some time out to check back on my blender skills and thus, have made a personal artwork - “Alien Abduction”. A classic scene with a touch of vintage.

When you have a moment, could you take a look and share your thoughts? I really value your input!

Before post-processing in Adobe Lightroom

I’ve also gotten back on doing GFX commissions (for a limited time & with DISCOUNTED prices). You’re always welcome to contact me if you’d like to hire me.

Check out my portfolio for further details: Blu | Graphic Designer | OPEN

Thanks for your time!

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In my opinion i think its pretty good. my critique is just about the alien mothership/ufo thats not that visible in the final version.

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Yes, I’ve been thinking of a way to make it more visible too without compromising on anything else.
Thanks for your feedback!

Looks sick, great camera angle as well.

I would suggest enhancing the bloom, as the headlights and lamp don’t really look like they’re emitting light. Maybe some volumetric lighting effect for the headlights as well?

What about adding a strip of light around the edges of the UFO, so we can see the outline while also adding more detail?

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Great idea! I’ll try to fix the things accordingly.
Thank you so much for replying.

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Kind of feels like old Roblox YouTube thumbnails lol, I love it.

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This personal artwork looks very good! Excellent job on creating this! How long did it take for you to make this artwork? I rate it 10/10! The graphics and lighting is great!

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Not bad!
(The overwhelming amount of noise makes the image look a whole lot worse, but that’s just my opinion)

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The guy + the car + the beam = perfect composition!

Nice stuff.

The color of lights is what caught my eye.
— Seems like the street lamps would work great with a warm orange hue.
— The headlight on his jacket would look better being more pale yellow.

The stop sign is a little odd. Maybe it needs more of a square base instead of a stubby pole.

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Thanks!
It took around 3 hours in total.

Thanks for pointing out. I’ll be working on fixing those things.
Really grateful for your time!