Hello everyone! I recently recreated an old meltdown I made, please give me suggestions on what to add to make it more suspenseful!
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anyone….?
minimum text requirement
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Set it at night. I think a dark atmosphere would be great
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i hear that black mesa music…
looks pretty good, just the actual sphere thing is a bit underwhelming in explosion
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cool but its anti climatic, with this you’d expect parts to be flying everywhere maybe dust covering the place to where you can’t really see, and a lot more screen shaking when the actual explosion happens and keeps happening
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Im imagining the whole place falling apart, debris flying everywhere, dust covering your vision, and red sirens blaring
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It looks good- just definitely go a bit more hollywood on the explosion
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Originally the game was based at night, however, I’m thinking of implementing a 24-hour cycle.
Thank you! I’m not sure why I didn’t think of that, ill for sure edit the shaking to make it rougher and add dust!
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Maybe emphasize the explosion more, as it currently feels a little bland. Perhaps more particles to liven it up a lil.
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This power plant meltdown looks good! Nice job on it! I recommend making the screen have red effects on it that show that it’s a serious situation, and make the countdown timer bigger and blink red when it gets to less than 1 minute. You should also make the power plant explode right when the timer is done. If you can, you should also make all the surrounding stuff get affected by the explosion. Otherwise, this is excellent! How long did it take to make this?
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Well this is a remake so in total maybe 2 days?
Thank you all for your feedback, i have edited it a little bit and taken account your suggestions. Tell me more things i should add or edit!! Revision: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=F0KgDKlYnYA
Edit: Yes, some audios are missing, i felt like too much was happening at once. Should i add back some?
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I absolutely love this version SO much more than the previous one, especially with the audio (the old one was a lil much lol). I do still think adding some dust or debris in the air could improve it heavily, but overall amazing work dude!!
Agreed witu the debris and dust floating around, but other than that this is great!