Hello! I am Domderp999. I am currently working on a new game called, “Escaped Prisoners.” It is a Prison game, officially releasing soon, and will also be promoted. However, I feel I need some feedback on the map, as though I feel that something is missing… I feel that the detail is too low. Here are some pictures below:
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You should make the last screenshot road like all the other roads with the concrete around it, without the concrete it looks kinda plain and weird. I like it a lot, the terrain is very well made and overall is good. The little details you added like the meteor site were spot on, and I love how you added different seasons around the map, like winter, tropical, desert, etc.
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Thank you very much! I was also thinking about putting the concrete back on the roads.
One suggestion I could give would be to vary the roads a bit more, possibly with multiple lanes. Also, in the sixth image, I noticed one of the trees growing out of the concrete
As for the last image, I assume you were going for a kind of beaten down, back road that not as many cars traveled on. If this is the case, I would grow some of the terrain over the edge of the road to give the feel that it has been there for a while.
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Map looks great! Only thing I see is in the image with the car, the road bends but in the last image, the road is corners (do not bend), and the lines look weird, and like stated above, you should add concrete to them. (doesn’t fit with the rest).
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Heck! Didn’t even realize. Thank’s for pointing that out.
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Very good! I especially like that the trees and terrain mix together very well. There should be streetlights for the roads though. Other than that it is a very good map.
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the last image has an issue where it’s too empty and what you did with the road which was mentioned above, you could also add some more eastereggs, for example on the snowy part of the map you could add a snowman, maybe a little frozen pond, you also gave us 2 same screenshots of the waterfall but the waterfall isn’t coming out of anywhere… I believe you should make like a little cave behind it, overall add more trees where it seems empty but not just the same tree models, make different models of like pine trees and maybe make a little forest somewhere, and you should work on that car a bit more… as well as that, on this screenshot you can see the road line going over another one, make that a little smoother if possible and there are a few other things that could be added like a desert pyramid, hidden temple(s), more civilized parts like an airport and really anything that a prison game would have, I’d like to see the finished product when it’s done, good luck! 
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Looks pretty smooth I just think on some roads you can definitely add more lanes.
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I think it looks good! Theres just a couple of things I would change. In image six you can see theres a tree growing out of the concrete. I would change that and make it look more natural. Secondly the grass decoration is poking out of the road. A simple solution to this would be painting the terrain under the road a different material thats not grass. Thirdly in the last image the map/region of the map seems incomplete. I would make it looks natural by adding more trees and a border. I would also create a border around the road so it doesnt look incomplete. Apart from that the map looks great!
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A cave behind it… Oh we already have a waterfall with that feature. I am not allowed to say what is behind it but. It will be released later this week. So maybe you could see it later… Thanks for the help! 
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While I find this map to be amazing, there are some minor issues
Here we have what looks to be lava rock next to snow, this looks unnatural and I would remove the snow
Here the climate transition is to fast, it goes from a grassy summer environment to a winter environment very abruptly
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It looks great but you need to fix the roads (especially in the last photo).
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I highly suggest you use this plugin for the roads. The meteor is unoriginal at this point. This is a useful plugin if you want terrain similar to Jailbreak. The car has a massive amount of clippings and looks like a mutated copy of one of Jailbreak’s cars. The terrain does look pretty good though, but is is unnatural.
Where on Earth is the water coming from?
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It looks good, but you should fix this road in the last screenshot. 
I think there’s too much green colour. You can add some more details such as flowers
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The map looks really good. The colour of the grass should be a little darker. Also, there should be a contrast of the colour green for grass. Maybe light at one side of the terrain and slowly the colour gets darker for the terrain so there would be good contrast of the colour. Additionally, I suggest changing the contrast of the colour when the sun goes down, and the moon comes up. I also recommend you change where the volcano is, because the volcano is located at such a random place. Maybe put it at a different spot. Overall, looks great! Hope you can use these suggestions/recommendations to help you optimise your game!
I visited your game, I like the texture which looks so friendly also the terrain in the game really looks so remarkable. The city building’s archiecture are also neat and really appreciated. Though my only problem is that when I joined in the guard’s team, police players need to hold keycards just to open the door. It should be automatic like in other prison games like Jailbreak or Prison Life, guards don’t hold their keycards, but the door automatically opens.
Though in all, the prison game you have created really looks so great and fun and I hope it would be someday it would be successful.