Hi there,
I recently made a more realistic piece, which is quite hard for a stylized artist… could you guys give me feedback?
Its magnificent to be honest. I love the shading part on the hair, skin, moon, and the clouds. Specially the dress
Everything is good exept the eye patch. There should be a little bit of the eye sticking out of the patch.
The good: The shading on the skin looks great! Decent shading on the dress ruffles. Good shape overall!
The bad: Complete miss on the hair. In a picture where all the other elements have some blur, the hair is perfectly in focus. (the eye is the focus on the picture, so that makes sense, the hair does not) Also, the hair is missing the shading style that works so well on the skin. It doesn’t cast a shadow either. Shape is fine!
The ugly: The eye patch is not symmetrical with the other eye. Her second eye is coming out the side of her head!
Verdict: The good far outweighs the bad. Fix the patch, shade the hair, and it will look even better.