Hello, I’d like to thank you for clicking onto this thread! I’m looking for feedback on my cafe. I’m not finished yet, but I’m looking on what to improve before I continue.
I’ve only been building for about 3 days now, I think I’m doing okay. Anyways, once again thanks for helping me improve this project!
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It looks great. The colours work well with each other. The has a modern and slick design. It is a work in progress so I cannot really complain about anything. I am looking forward to seeing it complete.
Possible Additions
The shadows currently appear quite heavy. Though I am sure you will add lights.
The floor in currently made of concrete, plastic or smooth plastic? Not something you would expect in a cafe. I suggest marble or carpet that are colours vibrantly to match the walls and design.
At some wall decorations like pictures or images so it does not appear plain.
The cafe must be convenient for the customers. The counter should be close to the entrance with seats not far away.
It must be spacious with seats not too close. The customers do not want to feel cramped.
I haven’t found a way to add lights just yet, though I think I’ll find a way.
I don’t know about the flooring, as I don’t know what to color it etc.
I’m also thinking about adding plants etc.
Hello,
Your build is quite the build, the color scheme seems to work well, the design seems to work well, but there are a few major factors in the build that makes it seem a bit off.
The building design is good, but we can try to make it Better, If you’re looking to create a more immersive design, I’d suggest going with a modern vibe, you can do so by creating an I’d say “Tropical” scenic design or so.
I’d suggest making the build modern, and reducing the size of the build greatly, and if possible; creating multiple buildings to go along with the first since you substituted the previous size.
You should add more vegetation/nature assets around the build entirely to give it more of a pop, to give it more of an eye-catching feel.
As @Lv100DominusUltimus addressed, The cafe must be convenient for the customers. The counter should be close to the entrance with seats not far away, but not too big to where the customers walk in and it’s literally at their face.
Creating a modern build can be quite fun, yet quite frustrating, I’d suggest reviewing some modern images from google to get a vibe and feel of modern assets/objects.
If you do need modern items, feel free to contact me, I will gladly provide a few modern assets for you to use within your build.
Hopefully my advice helps you advance to the next level of building, and have a great day!
The colour scheme is very good, even professional.
The build has a modern feel to it.
The build has great depth
I don’t know if it’s just me, but I don’t like the lines on the windows farthest to the left and right. It just doesn’t feel right.
The doors are OK, but you could have done better
Some lines/edges are uneven to each other.
Aside from that, I can’t really critique anything else since it’s just a work in progress now. Give us an update when it’s done.
Added, water, a dock (not finished). Also planning to add some lighting and plants maybe some mountains also?
I think you should change that concrete plate under the build to an island so the dock makes more sense and doesn’t just look like a concrete block with a cafe in the middle of the sea.
