Hello! I just rencently created my first render with Blender! This took me awhile to figure out and I eventually came through and made this! I am very happy with it and may use it for an icon for my game. Please provide feedback on my render, I want to improve apon this and make even better ones!
The render:
Great for starting out! Play around with more customization is my feedback. Like add some grass, shrubs, maybe your roblox avatar instead of the noob? Get creative! But overall 10/10!
Thank you! This was originally supposed to be a floating island and the noob was scared because he was floating in mid air, but i decided to make it look like he was on the ground. Thanks for your feedback!
Hello that looks nice but for some reason this feals not orginal because I’m pretty sure I saw the scared noob and the background before, anyways good job
very plain and blend, I suggest adding a better pose to the character.
lighting is horrible (no offense), add more lights to add a better feel to the render.
the hill doesn’t feel natural, and It doesn’t even look like a blender render.
You should add some background like hills or trees because from my point of view, it looks like the noob is standing on top of a hill, and the lighting is kinda meh, maybe put lighting behind your camera, the light will glow on your noob which should be like the main focus for the render, and maybe do like a scared pose because the pose looks very simple, other then that congratulations on your first render 
The posing is a bit bland. Try to think of an expressive posing than this one. Also, you put the character slightly a bit to the left, which didn’t emphasize me to look at it. Try putting it exactly in the middle. Lastly the lighting is horrible, I’m sorry to say the least but it really didn’t appeal me. Please position the lighting well sometime. These are my critiques.
Your first render? Looks really nice! I’d recommend using HDR’s though, and making the film transparent. Gives off better lighting, and you don’t even have to do much work to use them!
Also the posing doesn’t go with the face lol
