Hello! I’d like to get some feedback on my latest and first real game, Ro-Bakery. This project started earlier this year as a way to practice my building and scripting abilities. I’ve learned a lot from it, but I’d love to hear your feedback on how I could improve. Link is below.
https://www.roblox.com/games/8043294335/Ro-Bakery
Thanks for reading!
The colour scheme is perfect - not too bright, not too dark - the cartoony style, build design, and description of the game match together very well.
What can be Improved:
-The GUI at the top is a little bit big when playing, also I would maybe put it at the bottom or the side, the top is better for things like the time or objectives etc.
-This needs a tutorial badly, I was lost in what I was meant to do.
-Also needs music, that would the style together.
-I can buy a house without 100 coins at it puts me into -100.
So, pretty much, Building, Scripting and Mechanics work great! It’s just the Game Design that needs some attention.
Brilliant for a first game 
