Feedback on Roblox X GTA5 Loading Screen thumbnail

Hey Developers! I just finished a little render for a GTAV styled loading screen in my spare time!
Feedback is highly appreciated!
Program(s) used: Blender/Photoshop
What do you like?
How is the lighting?
What could be improved on
What could be added/removed?
As always, thanks in advance for your feedback!

As always, for those who want to show some extra love… I present to you, the waywoc post!

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I’m looking forward to seeing all the feedback when I wake up tomorrow morning! :slight_smile:

typography of “ROBLOX” doesn’t fit the rest of it, the kerning, font and outlining is different
I’m assuming the scene is a person getting a mugshot, but the lighting is quite overblown on their face for a clear representation of their face, and the camera seems like it’s pointing at their pelvic region. Backdrop should have the ruler markings for height. Since they’re indoors there should be an additional light source from the ceiling above, else it looks like a pitch-black room with a singular floodlight pointed at the character

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Thanks very much for the feedback! I will definitely take this into consideration when making my next render!

Hmm, I see. Thanks! :slight_smile: This really helps.