I’m currently working on a map for a project that I’ve been developing, but I feel that the hallways are waaay too simple and plain. I’m all out of ideas, so I’m asking for some from the DevForum community. What should I add to enhance the quality of this hallway/make it more detailed?
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Maybe make the electric line things stick out.
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Hallways looks pretty small in my point of view.
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Looks nice, the red and black mix well. Maybe try to add other neon lights on the floor and the walls, and add point lights to the neon parts
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It looks very simple, poor in details… Maybe if you add like ceiling lamps and make the hallway sides more rounded, this probably would make it more futuristic.
I would say that these lines are very highlighted, and the fact that they are straight does not match with the other details, so i would recommend to make them in zig zag.
But you are doing great, keep the good work! 
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Is it supposed to be a low-poly kind of cartoony sci-fi hallway or a realistic sort of hallway?
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More cartoony.
Then it looks pretty good! I like the small red lines on the floor, it’s a nice touch.
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no its actually really big look how small the door on the left is compared to the hallway
That’s actually not a door, but a vent 
Tbh, I think the hallway is a reasonable size
but there is no cover… kinda sus
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Its not the typical among us type vent 
more like one you can crawl through to escape something. Or someone for that matter…
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oh ok like flee the facility also the among us reference was a joke
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Sorry if this is harsh but here we go
- The hall looks very basic material wise try using neon on the srtips and metal on the hallways
- the hard surface modeling (if there is any) is bad try redoing it here’s a image on what you could do
Sci Fi Corridor by Digger2000 on DeviantArt - try adding bloom effect in the lighting here some documentation on that.
Post-Processing Effects | Documentation - Roblox Creator Hub - the hallway looks empty try adding crates or windows into the hallway
Again sorry about the harshness i hope it wasn’t too bad.
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Nope, everything you just said I’m taking into heavy consideration. I actually appreciate the raw honesty you put into your post and don’t find it harsh at all. Thanks!
this looks like an old roblox game lol