I made this for a game im making. Feedback to improve is appreciated!
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It looks good for your second GFX but here’s some things to make it even better
- get rid of the body at the red kill brick or reposition it, it looks like three blocks stuck together. Make it lay down or something to show that it’s dead.
- please please please change the background color, it’s very painful to look at. probably just my eyes- Make it a pastel purple or a lighter color.
- maybe add a level or two and zoom out a bit to show players trying to beat it if it’s an obby game? not sure what the GFX is for I’m just guessing
- get rid of the body laying on the floor or reposition it, like #1, looks weird-
hope you take this into consideration and I can’t wait to see an improved version!
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I think it’s a pretty cool concept but it’s a little hard to look at.
I would try a different color background.
These people don’t look like people:
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Not gonna lie this feels similar to my first GFX! Very blocky, unexpressive characters, boring backgrounds, and low detail builds.
There is much room for improvement though. Let me give you some suggestions!
- Watch tutorials! They don’t have to be Roblox GFX related. You can watch any tutorial and pick up details from it. Then, you can use the ideas and implement them into your scene.
- Change the background to a sky background. Most obbies take place in the sky and this looks like another one as well. You can do this by importing an HDRI into your scene.
- Use rigs. You can bend their elbows and knees. Use that to create a more realistic jumping/grabbing impression!
- Add more variety to your characters! Every person was a noob. You can help remedy this by reducing the amount of characters. Even better, change the avatars themselves! Feel free to add yourself and friends.
- Try to make a better detailed obby. Currently it looks very boring with no decoration at all. Looking at the thumbnail, I’d expect the obby to be low quality, leading me to click off.
- Change the camera angle. There should be more focus on the winning noob while he looks down at everyone else. It’d also hide the fact that the obby is literally floating.
- Get rid of the dead noobs. The way you positioned them isn’t great. Instead have one of them tripping and the one on the purple floor completely removed.
I hope you find the road to improvement. There’s a lot ahead to look out for. Good luck.
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1.5/10
Very low resolution, high noise
Posing is very bad
No skybox, just a big purple wall
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